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Clover I walk in the bright sunshine I smell fresh air I see beautiful view around I listen to bird sing cheerily I pick up fragrant flowers I blow the dandelion I watch the mini flying parachutes up and down I wear clover flower ring like a princess I lie down on clover lawn and watch the blue sky I laugh loudly I play in my childhood’s playground I am a little girl again! 
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Nice, I can still remember the smell of clover. But there is a side smell too, cow pucky.  Bees chasing me across fields of clover and stepping into cow pucky. Uggggggggggggggggg
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7/6/2005 9:31 am |
I remember you asked before to help you make corrections to your entries so you can improve your writing skills. May I make the following suggestions? I walk in the bright sunshine ADN smell THE fresh air I see beautiful VIEWS ALL around I listen to THE bird sing CHEERFULLY I pick up fragrant flowers I blow UPON the dandelion AND watch the mini parachutes FLOAT up and down I wear A clover flower ring like a princess I lie down UPON A clover lawn and watch the blue sky I laugh loudly I play in my childhood’s playground I am a little girl again! Please keep writing.
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7/6/2005 9:32 am |
oops, I made a spelling error. I walk in the bright sunshine AND smell THE fresh air I see beautiful VIEWS ALL around I listen to THE bird sing CHEERFULLY I pick up fragrant flowers I blow UPON the dandelion AND watch the mini parachutes FLOAT up and down I wear A clover flower ring like a princess I lie down UPON A clover lawn and watch the blue sky I laugh loudly I play in my childhood’s playground I am a little girl again!
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7/6/2005 8:27 pm |
Thanks, Victory Lee. If nobody make correction for me, I would stop writing here.
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YOu mean it is ok if we make corrections for you? Wow!!!! Did you know that there are some blogs like 'miles of receipes' where they get upset if you even make a simple comment in their blog? Ok, I'll help you learn proper English, too.
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7/14/2005 5:44 am |
i remember blowing the dandelion flower and making a wish. blow all off and wish come true. i am still waiting for my special love to appear. i miss them now. erica visit my blog and let's chat
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